All Comments on 'Dragon (S)Layers Ch. 15'

So! Apparently this wasn't too well received, rating really low and all, but I'm curious as to why. On one hand, it's gotten more votes than any other piece I've posted here but the actual rating is the lowest I've ever gotten (or seen, actually!) I'm curious as to why!

Please, feel free to post your thoughts here or send them to me anonymously. I'm not looking for flame bait, but honest constructive criticism. I'm fairly thick skinned so blast away. :)

-Tam

damn good story sir

Don't think I can even guess why. Don't have the "trend" background for the previous chapters, but by itself, this is well written, good grammar, skilled and playful dialogue, you change up the pacing so it doesn't drone on in a blow-by-blow, overall it's a light-hearted little piece with actual characters talking to each other.

*shrug* Maybe someone was on the rag, or a troll was wanking off, or someone really hates lesbians. Nothing I see warrants a legitimate slam.

i've truly been enjoying this series. i'm not sure why more people are voting low. i average a 4 or 5 star with each chapter. So keeping on writing and don't worry about the ney-sayers.... after all, they don't have to keep reading if all they are going to do is low ball their votes. Keep up the great story line. Looking forward to finding out what caused the thin red line on Sarah's throat and seeing just where she leads her motley crew to next. *warm smile*