All Comments on 'Dream Date!'

You are a smooth-talkin' devil and my momma warned me about men like you! She said to run away from your kind and to um...squeeze my legs shut and never open them around your kind.

WOW. Now that was a very good story. I hope that you have more chapters planned for this story.

Yes, there were some mistakes in grammer, etc., but, compared to some of the other stories that I've read here, it was easily overlooked by me.

As usual, a well-written amazing erotic story. Keeping all the scenes inside home, yet giving the sense that they were going out, was amazing.

I liked the way you seamlessly switched POV.

well written ,well thought out ,enjoyed

It took a while for them to finally get around to having sex, but it was worth the wait.

A well thought out storyline and it worked nicely.

Thanks for the read...

Thank you for showing big woman can be erotic. Yet it seemed she wanted him less as it went on. At first her pussy was glowing and wet for him, then later she had to "make him work for it" a theme which was repeated. Also the "mommy" thing was a little of a turn off. (wrong category) yet it was enjoyable and well written. Don't stop! I look forward to you next submission.

You never disappoint and it's always a pleasure to read your stories!

Nothing better than fucking your own sister or mother...the best sex ever...go for it

excellent

This story definately deserves more chapters. Excellent

Pretty good story , a bit sad all round really , losing their parents so young and then when they finally get together at the end she couldn't have a baby.

was a good read so please write some more

Very hot and mind blowing

Gat me cumming