All Comments on 'Dream Fulfilled'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Good story

Though long, it holds to read completely. Very well expressed a persons thougts. This really revealed a many common thoughts of men. Really a nice story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
unshaven beauty

Women with unshaven pits....are they still there. What a welcome change. I devoured the first part and look forward to the sequel of this hirsute beauty.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
exciting!

Excelent story! lively description, want more. please continue your excellent work! Thanks for giving extra pleasure to bengali readers by putting "bangla shanglap". Would have been better if you put 'khisti' during their exciting love-making 'choda-chudi'. Ahh--Ruby ! want to read the continuation--!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Great work of art!

Hello,

Thanks for this excellent piece of erotic writing. Keep writing and continue giving us such erotic jewels.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
HOT

I WOULD GIVE THIS STORY A 10 IF I COULD

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
bangla bhalo bhashi

hey dude the story was awesome.the vivid description of ur sis in law almost made me cum in my pants.hope u keep writin more stories.ciao

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
phew its hot

ruby u r doin a magnificient job. its really hooooot like ur other stories....i'm dripping baddly in my shorts. rubu can u write sum similiar gr8 bro - sis hot incest stuff...please.

backwoodsman1952backwoodsman1952about 19 years ago
great story

This is well written and very erotic. I love the earth unshaven woman and wish there was one like that in my life. The shared cigarette, the aroma's of her underarms and descriptions of her body were so erotic. Thanks you and please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I saw my Sali in your story

A good story like all others of yours. It resembles my relationship with my sali (sis-in-law). We saw each other nude many times, she slept many times in my bed, I played with her clit, I shaver her many times almost everything we have done like your story even before reading it. Only difference is I have not fucked her yet. Someday it will happen like your story. I am waiting for that rainy day.....

bill_p99bill_p99about 18 years ago
Good story

Well written with a slow detailed erotic tension.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
excellent is the word,nothing else ican say

story really is excellent i wish i will have some immagination to do the same ,even in my immagination.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Greatest Story

It would be dream cum true to make love to all these 3 women at once.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

very very good . my dick is flying i would love to fuck this lady

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Looking forward to the sequel

I stumbled on this area by sheer accident. Must have been my lucky day.

Avidly waiting for the sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
When will my dream be completed?

I have not one but 2 Saalis' , whom I lust for, and I am sure that they do too. When, when..., when.........., Hope my story has a happy ending as yours.

r????

Simply mind-blowing. Just a small glitch. Once the T-shirt is off, it is off, how does it come back on......... I wonder????

Well done..... keep it up.

binoy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
HOt hoT HOT hot

wht a story...dream sequence took me completely by shock...well done ruby...just a minor complaint...please take extra care with your endings...they look very abruptly ended...now if yu will excuse me i will have to rush to the bathroom

INDRANIL

corte33corte33over 11 years ago
Great, as usual!

Thank you for the wonderful stories!!

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