All Comments on 'Dream Love Fulfilled'

Very well written I thought, great detail.

...Stupidity_Unlimited!

It never ceases to amuse me that so many writer wannabes seem to think they've got what it takes to compose even a decent piece of erotica, and this one is no exception.

Inane, at best; ridiculous at worst.

One suggestion? Leave writing to WRITERS!

This series is very nice, quite risque, forbidden, adventurous and erotic. Though not perfect, most of the writing is fairly well done. Somebody (AitS) might ease up the criticism, as I have seen much worse writing on this board that did not draw such aggressive put-downs. Notice that most comments on "Dream Love" have been quite positive and I agree with them.

Damn but this story was HOT... I just love a hot fuck story being told by a women with a hot sexy mouth. Love it with a hot mature woman fucks both of the young ones into the mattress. My only problem was in trying to read with only one hand.

I will be reading more of your work.!!!

This is a fantastic story. I hope you haven't let that ass Anonymous in The South stop you from writing more stories like this one. I hope to read more of your stories soon.