All Comments on 'Dream Lover'

by mamaval2930

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Beautiful

Well done! I miss my far away lover too. I enjoyed the dream :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I Could Feel It

Mamaval's writings are perfect. Her images are concise and her stories stay on track. Dream Lover made me FEEL the passion her main character is experiencing. And being away from the woman I love, missing her with all my heart, I can so very much relate to this story. Her pace is again, as with A Walk To Remember, right on target. When she and her wonderful lover climax, I'm there too. And the aftermath tears my heart apart like barbed fishhooks. Mamaval KNOWS what she's writing about and conveys it with crystal clarity.

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Conservative and professional by day, vixen by secret. I write both romantic stories, as well as erotica. My goal is to bring pleasure to people with my writing.