All Comments on 'Dreaming of Daddy's Baby'

This was super hot only for the constant slut.. That was a big turn off.

Real !!

That would have been interesting if at the end you had her wake up and realize it’s not a dream and that she has just been made a mother by her own father . Or even maybe had the dream start out by having been real we’re she hearing her parents try for another baby and then they dream happens right after she decided to throw her birth control pills in the trash and steal her mother fertility and prenatal pills and then she has the dream and wakes up to her father in her bed and her mother in a chair next to them playing with her cum filled pussy and the mom saying we already switched your birth control pills your dad is extremely Potent we’re probably both pregnant with your dad’s babies and her waking up again still thinking it’s a dream until she and her mom both take pregnancy tests and her realizing it was real and maybe they father could have sex with both mom and daughter throughout there pregnancies and then all of the sudden they both go into labor on the same day but they dad has to run between rooms

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real

Loved it! Real please

For being a first story, I really liked it very much! Hope you keep on writing more stories like this one!!!

hi dear...

please write sequel with real...

and add flavours of breast milk suck...

if possible please write another story...where a boy pregnant his Sister and mom both, they all sucked four breast milk mitually.

Make it real. They can keep having sex up to the time of birth. BJ in the delivery room. Then she can feed them both.

Keep writing. I like your style and your understanding of the basic needs of a man. Continue with the story. Girl realizes that it's not a dream, finds her pills in the garbage, decides not to retrieve them. The mother is unaware. Hiding and collusion.

Thank you

So good!

I like the little twist at the end that was a very good storyppf

More plz I loved it makes me feel as if she was me

Please make it real, it would be a shock for her and more dramatic

This was so hot damn I need a little slut like that.

Continue pls

Make it real it would be more interesting and dramatic, you will then be able to make more stories/chapters.

first a fetus grows in the womb, not the cervix...he can't cum in her womb and coat it with cum, he can in her passage....pleass with the rare 12" dicks, doesnt make it better story in this case...and how old are they Johnny Depp was almost 50 when ylu wrote it and you say he looks older...wish this was longer and she was lactating

Please describe your body, hot daddy's seed was hot. Daddy's big balls emptied all of his seed in my hot pussy.

Ooohh Daddy. Please please put a baby inside my wet pussy. I want your cum inside me so bad Daddy

Omg this story is great daddy daughter and pregnancy wow I'd prefer more passion to it though.

REAL

I really liked this story. I would love to read more.

Let daddy teach the baby daughter you would have given him? When you see he walks into her room and closes the door what would you have done?

Very erotic. Would love follow ups. Agree that maybe slut is not the right word and is used too often. A 12" penis is kinda too much, 8" is plenty. Agree that it be a dream she turns into reality by seducing her father. Love that she wants to get pregnant a lot (this is a fantasy, after all).

My Daddy never touched me but I fantasized about him incestuously and would love to have been the girl in this story. To this day I don't know how I would have reacted if my father had hit on me for real. This story aroused the same feelings produced by my lustful fantasies for my father .

hey date me plz

I would prefer it to be real. But the way it was written, it would have to be a dream.

I enjoyed it, but next time, maybe keep down the size of the dick? Let's be real, no one could handle that much :p

This story was soo good. I've fantasized about my daughter wanting me to get her pregnant. I visualize watching her belly grow each month just like the father in your story. I too like the father in this story would love to be breastfed by my daughter. This story definitely needs at least a second chapter.

It should definately be real

Well if its a dream its one thing, might give license for some of the absurdity, heh. Gotta agree with another poster, daddy calling her a slut was a major turnoff, and to top that off calling her a cum dumpster. Him calling her a slut put me in an off mood for the rest of the story too... Then the 12" dick. Ugh! (Well if she was dreaming...). I actually hate it when an author posts dick size, it really isnt necessary when a good description works fine. ...kind of like authors insisting that all these 18 yo girls have tits that rang from a D to ZZ and all that nonsense. (Hey, more than a handful is a waste! Hehe). ....that and the fascination with a big ass... I just dont get that. You ever try and fuck a girl doggie style with a big ass? It just gets in the way! Lol ;)

If it was real, the father would not have a twelve-inch cock (probably closer to half that size) and his ejaculate would amount to about one to two teaspoons, certainly not enough to make her belly swell like she's three months pregnant. Any more than that and it is in the realm of fantasy, not reality.

Incest babies by consent is the future!

If you put this as a dream you can take it into a more... Erotic Direction. If you lead us into a reality-based situation the story will die and you will be limited on how you can write it. Please know I am only trying to give you honest comments as I liked your story.

REAL please. And do another chapter.

Kinda ruined the story before it even got started with him calling her Slut. I mean, wtf? What daddy wanting to fuck his daughter wants to call her a slut? Ironically sober people go out of their way to AVOID fucking sluts! Hell, I know I do! Sigh.

I used to dream about sex with my stepdaddy, after I turned 18 it happened but I didn't get pregs. Oh Well...

Keep up the writing, you made me very very hot.

Very hot the only thing would been better a build up not too long but a small biuld up lie daddy saw me in my thong but over all very hot i love to read the daughter begging to get pregnant by daddy please make it real and a hint add some hot anal

Lame. Lame dad calling his baby a slut and lame ass 12" dick bullshit, and lame ass going to keep you knocked up and lame ass creeper / molester dad climbing on his unknowing unsuspecting girl in the middle of the night, no matter how it turned out. This is more creeper/chester the molester writing than erotica, by a long shot!

who's going to take care of these dozen or more babies? In these stories where the plan is to just breed like crazy, I can't help thinking it's going to be incredibly hectic and stressful days AND nights of diapering, feeding, crying, teething, earaches . . . not much hot fucking going on when you've got 5 children under the age of 5. People DO know pregnancy leads to actual human children, right??

Make it real, we all know she wants to feel her belly swell with her father's baby.

So freaking good

I have two, two years apart. The oldest is 19 years younger than me, so the age difference is not radically different. I've been fucking them since ...well, let's say quite awhile. The oldest wants desparately to have my baby and I'm seriously considering it. We're moving to Maui in a couple of months and I think that's when I'll impregnate her. We'll tell people she's my wife and my youngest is our daughter. I think we can pull that off. Karen said she's been having dreams about getting pregnant. Your girl dreamed all of this but her daddy overheard her and will now fuck her and knock her up.

My daddy made me his by making a baby in me too. My mom even loves the fact that her only daughter is pregnant by the one who fathered me. She says its a dream cum true. And daddy is happy too. Of course I am and can't wait till he makes another baby in me.

I WOULD LOVE TO BE YOUR DADDY

I'm currently cumming so hard after reading that!!! More more more!!!!!

I vote make it real

Real!! Plzzzzz do real I'm literally on the edge of my seat 4 a sequal

Make it real. Would love to see a follow up on it.

I'm partially a writer and I think it's awesome. Keep going! You can have lofts of different plots, like her unsure whether or not to tell her father about the dream if its a dream or if its real you can have her debate with herself on wheather or not to get off the pill.

I've wanted my dad and I have been masturbating for years wishing my own dad would fuck me. I'd love controlling him and his cock. I'm stacy18_bi@hotmail.com

I enjoyed this very much, I say it be reality and please continue

I enjoyed your story very much. I would like you to continue it and have her realize that it was real and not a dream.

Not the execution. Could have been way better if the word slut kept repeating. It was redundant.

Real!!

My Dear LadyLeannan: You naughty little girl, I figure this much: If it was only a dream, then there is the difficulty of somehow re-creating that same dream over and over, again. However, if it is, in fact, a sublime reality, then your dirty, sultry, sluttiness will never have to concern yourself with what most assuredly would only be an exercise in futility, at best. Thus, My Dear LadyLeannan, and because you do not seem to have any afflictions of the cranial dome, it could only be a reality; especially if your determination to allow Daddy to drink your sweet breast nectar resounds the way it does. Real, nasty, slutty, girl. Real. As always, I sign my true name, Michael.

REAL!! R-E-A-L!!!

Does any one have any doubt as to whether this young lady (unnamed) wants to be impregnated...and stay pregnant until her biological clock no longer (runs) performs!!

And all the training, experience, practice of pumping cum into your daughter's steamy, hot pussy!!! Great story, with an excellent subject matter!!

please continue and i would prefer it to be real

Dear LadyLeannan... I loved your "Dreaming of Daddy's Baby" very HOT and very EROTIC...I myself want more and I would prefer REAL...Nothing I love better than stories of daddy's fucking there hot and YOUNG little slut daughters and knocking them up gist makes the storie that much HOTTER for me...Please keep this storie going... " THE DARK LORD "...

Please make it real

I love it read part 2

When the daughter is 8 months pregnant, the dad should fuck her up her ass several times a week, but ATM. Otherwise, great beginning. Keep the slut cumming with her Daddy's incestuous cum.

Real...great story!

This was so fucking hot. Plugging her cervix was a nice touch. Sweet jeezus on high! I nearly came from that alone! Please make it real! There has GOT to be more of this!

I have wanted to seduce my stepdad and get preggo by him too. I came from reading your story and now I really want rick to fuck me every day until I get pregnant. I'm stacy18_bi@hotmail.com

very hot!

Luv this story i was soo wet reading this. You should make her wake up in her room and every night she should think is a dream until she finds out she is pregnant.

I think she should wake up with her head and shoulders on the floor, while daddy is holding her legs up in the air,making sure not one drop drop of cum escapes. He has got to make sure she's knocked up!

I just loved the way Daddy went through her cervix and spewed his cum directly inside her baby box. Maybe his cock could go a bit farther through her cervix and then she could wake up at the very moment he's dropping his huge load in her uterus, and she would realize what he is doing and be so in favor of it that she would wrap her legs around him making sure he doesn't pull out until the full load is inside her body. Oh YES, make it real!!

Hey I don't mean to be self-involved here but i just wanted to ask u guys something. I have had a dream about..u know..my dad and me. Twice actually. Nothing wild..just passionate. And it really freaks me out because I have no sexual fetishes or fantasies. And this never happened when I had a boyfriend, which btw, was a long-distance. I am still a virgin, except for the fact that my brother took a little advantage of me when we both were too young to know any better. Virgin to the point where I haven't even kissed anyone yet. What can the dreams mean and how can i make them stop?

Make it real but have it so that she still thinks it's a dream until she winds up pregnant.

real please

Please make it real!

I hope you do another series where Daddy isn't trash talking his daughter. Cum dumpster? Fine for this one, but I'd like to read one where Daddy loves his daughter and doesn't just see her as a young fuck toy.

You need to write a part 2....

I think this should be real and that the birth control that she thinks, she has been taking was switch for two months or so were actuarial prenatal pills that would would give her would increase her pregnancy by 40-50% and she didn't notices the change at all in till she start showing.

You don't have to use it but I just wanted to say what I think is going to happen next is all.

Real

She was dreaming, but daddy heard her came in to check and found her with her hand rubbing her pussy and he took over her never waking.

Wakes in the mornning to find a sore pussy and cum still running out.

OK now let's get real, why is it all these stories have a man with a 10 or 12" cock?

Except for the extra large cock I found your story very good, thanks for writing and please do a follow up.

email me if you want

i think it would be cool if it was real :)

DREAMS CAN BECOME REALITY.

Great beginning, and I liked that it opened up as her "dream" sequence, but make it real please! Thanks

i felt like i was truly being fucked by daddy and i was his slut...make it real

great story i would perfer if it was not a dream, yes make a sequel but with a lot of breast milk and a lot of breeding

Wow that was a great story. Very well writen. Makes me want to read the next one.

hot and well written.....part 2 so he can claim his slut

I've fantasizes about doing this to my daughter in a dream, so make your real!!!!

OMG!!! I swear I felt him cum inside me! Please Keep writing!

This story hits all my favorite fantasies. Please continue it, and let her really be pregnant!

Make it real. Have him make her his property, fuck her cervix and fill her womb so she looks pregnant. This is the hottest thing ever, you are very talented.

Make the dream come true in exquisite detail!

Make it reality-- her father drugged her so he could fuck her. Hot hot hot!

Trawling through the rubbish written on this site to find your story was great. Keep writing. Had me hot because that's my fantasy too. Good work. Looking forward to you doing more. My 2c make it a recurring dream that turns out to be true. She must be a heavy sleeper ;)

I would say she think es is a dream but it happend real. She will find out that she is pregnant.

I think you should keep this one as a dream. The line " I was so full that it looked like I was 3 months pregnant" places it in the world of dreams for me. But maybe have her wake up and started to go after her dad to make it real would be a nice touch

I think it should not be a dream,and then she realizes later that she is pregnant. She has a little girl, and when the little girl is old enough Daddy gets her pregnant too.

In my opinion this story should be a dream that she works to make a reality. Great job and keep writing.

Great story. Wish you would continue it.

Wonderful story! I would like to see it turn from a dream into a real situation. I can't wait for a sequel or a series under this theme, it's so very taboo and therefore so kinky! Thanks for taking the time to write a great submission.

I love how you put it as a dream or you didn't know it was a dream.. seemed too real to be one. I hope you still make it a dream until something in the story makes it more real like.. That might be interesting.

I really would love more stories from you and more on this one, Good job!