All Comments on 'Dreams of Jean Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Keep going!

Not as good as part one, but still good...don't get it all confusing with getting too many players at once.

fullchoketubesfullchoketubesalmost 12 years ago
Love/Hate

I can't decide if I love this one or hate it. The story line and theme is very hot, but it is hard to follow the characters. You do a great job writing about thoughts and feelings, but the flow from scene to scene is very choppy.

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