All Comments on 'Dreamweaver'

An excellent story. I hope this is just the first chapter.

I love you writing hope ther is more to come. I agre excellent story!

I love you writing hope ther is more to come. I agre excellent story!

You write very well. Good use of the language. Nice eroticism. Not to sure I like the mind control gambit. Keep up the good work.

MORE MORE MORE

... the mind control idea put me off from the start. He was virtually forcing - raping? - his sister. Maybe it should been in the Mind Control Section.....?

The story itself was very well told - top marks, there!

Lukas

A story of reverse control, most of us girls have the ability to control any partner we choose. But we seldom use our abilities. This story is truly great a dream of what we are capable of in reverse.

great keep writing

Jan,

Wow that was a nice story especially since my name is Hunter.

MORE MORE!

we want more..

Now, that was friggin' hot. More please??? =P

Wonderful story! I love the fantasy aspect of the mind control. Very powerful and sexy story!

Thanks for sharing a really good tale with us. The mind control aspect made it really interesting and more fun.

I really enjoyed this story, it'd be nice to see more from you.

Why this story is not marked Hot by Lit is beyond me. A quick read that flowed beautifully, even with the cutting back and forth between brother and sister's thoughts. It kept me aroused and interested, especially in its realism. Hunter's "gift" aside, this could easily be a real-life story. The only slight items I would have liked to see were (1) how Hunter acquired his gift (if you're gonna go there; you need to REALLY go there) and (2) more dialog - not necessarily "dirty talk" - just more dialog in general. I think that adds a lot to a good story. Regardless, great job. Makes me want to get back to writing.

Ray (aka Writerotica)

I loved it, and rated it 5 stars. I especially enjoyed how he just planted the seed in her mind but when they were finally together she was operating of her own "free" will. Much different than so many mind control stories where they basically turn people into robots.

I would love to read a follow up to see what happens now. Does he need to continue to plant the idea that it's OK to overcome her aversion to the taboo? Does he suggest kinky things in her mind that they act on in reality?

All in all a great premise.

I wish I had that power...

For me it's a BIG 5!

More, please!

What a hot sexy story of love and lust between siblings. Please write some more I really like your work.

Very hot and sexy story!

Thank You