All Comments on 'Driving Adventure'

by Addicted2Writing

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Shysub412Shysub412almost 10 years ago
Loved it!

Extremely hot, well written and Joe sounded just yummy.

Every emotion came across so strong, the scene set beautifully.

A nice interlude while we wait for the next Hamish instalment..cough..gentle prod...

I would give it far more than 5 stars, but i can't so I've added gold glittery bits to the 5 i can!

MastersWenchMastersWenchalmost 10 years ago
Hot

Hot story! Well done! *fanning self*

MastersWench

Addicted2WritingAddicted2Writingalmost 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks, guys

Shysub: Yes, I am still working on Chap 16 of AfG. It's loaded with sex (pretty much the whole chapter!), and that always takes me longer. It'll be up soon!!

Masterswench: I'll send ya a fan!! Seriously, the trucker fantasy always hits me when I'm traveling. I just never thought of writing/posting it, but Mistress 'made' me.

To you both: When I initially submitted, it was rejected because it was only 500 words, so I had to add my little fantasy. Wouldn't it have been nice if a trucker I <I>did</I> pick up was that hot?! *evil grin*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

love this one but please finsh the others ones wating

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Joe and Jeannie

Could you make a chapter of Mistress giving them a whole couple of days(possibly) and let them enjoy each other as if they were lovers? :) This was an amazing read. I didn't want it to end. Loved every bit of it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Call me Addicted to your writing!

I am so glad I started reading your series. I was very offput by the male picture in your biography, but the "f" made me give your story a try. ( Sorry but I'm not into gay BDSM, it does nothing for me). I am now hoping the young man in the picture is your Dom and that you are both madly in love. I will be checking back with you frequently, but I won't be giving you advice. Anything I say would be closer to whining (Please write faster, etc). Thank you very much for your effort and expertise. Mike

JudyLeeJudyLeeover 8 years ago
I loved it.

What a great story. Mistress was so kind to go to the trouble of setting up Jeannie's fantasy. And Joe was kind and gentle. I love reading stories where the sub is treated with love and care.

Lorelei907Lorelei907almost 5 years ago
Very erotic!

Love the descriptions, well written and easy to read. It got me very hot and was at my folks house so, as much as I wanted to touch myself I couldn’t. Will be re-reading it when I get home later tonight ;-)

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