All Comments on 'Driving Lessons'

Nice story there.

wud like to read the nxt 1s to follow

Nice build up and description. Would like to read more.

Horribly put together. Sentences built from thoughts not even connected.

This last guy. Was he reading the same hot bro-sis story I was.

Was believeable, and sensuous. The grammar may have had a few mistakes, but so what. Looking forward to where this is heading in chapter 2 (and maybe 3 and 4)

Did she pass the test in the end?

Well written, only critisism would be that there is a need for just a bit more character development for the sister, otherwise a very nice story.

I really enjoyed it would like to see chapter 2

thought this was REALLY good.

i absolutely loved this..

i found that i couldn't stop reading as i was so drawn into their minds and their way of thinking..

lets just say i need a napkin for my seat!!! lol

fab..

This is right up there in the top 10 of my favorites! Was so hot I didn't even notice the grammatical mistakes mentioned by the earlier comment. Yet I'm left with the feeling that the story is somehow incomplete...is there more to be told? Let's hope so!

This was the hottest story I've ever heard and now I need a shower. KEEP WRITING!!

that was really hot keep up the good work

Oh boy so good

An excellent blend of erotica and tenderness.

give us some more about this horny couple of siblings - we need to know what happens next - please -

Great story would love to read more! when is the second chapter cumming?!

that was insanely hot.

alot of detail and a different situation for once.

loved it

Really enjoyed it.

Like some of the others, I would like to have seen more chapters about these two. I thoroughly enjoy your writing style. You do know how to tell a great sibling incest tale!

This story made me so wet. It's the best sib sex I've read, especially liked how at the beginning neither of them were thinking of it until she walked in on him.

That was a very sensual story indeed, excellent work. Looking forward to reading more from you!

Enjoyable!

This is some of the best writing I've read. Well paced with just enough detail. I hope you continue to write.

The title says it all. I ABSOLUTELY LOVED ITTTTT!!!!!!!!

An 18-year-old who has never seen a penis? Give me a break. Not in this day and age.

But the set up makes no sense. Why was he graduating at 19 yrs old in the USA??? Why was sister at 18 not graduating as almost everyone in the USA. There could be many reasons, but 95% of the time it mean both were dumb and flunked a grade. Some states allow 5 year olds to start 1st grade in the past, but ALL allow 6 year olds to start at 6. Successful lawyer and doctor had tons of money so why get bro to teach her to drive instead of a professional driving school??? That's a south side of the tracks set up. Like I said the story is good, but the set up is a head scratcher.

Nice build up, to a superb ending. The idea that Amanda was wearing one of those plaid Catholic school skirts is also intensely arousing, and I say that as a one time Catholic school guy who spent a lot of time around girls in those skirts. Hope there are more "driving lessons' to come.

I got feeling not look yet not more to it, like got home took shower together to clean all the cum , juicy pussy off before parents got home, and more trips to cherry popping woods ,