All Comments on 'Driving Miss Cindy'

Liked it a lot. Thanks for sharing.

This isn't a bad plot and telling the story through dialogue makes it come alive. However, the dialogue is stilted without the contractions that English speakers generally employ in their conversation. With a bit of polishing, the couls have been superb.

I like the writing and the story line right up until the ending. She is just as manipulating as her sleazy boss. That is too big a red flag for a happy ending. But overall an enjoyable read. anon jerry

Great story, light hearted with a sinister twist, something that I have come to expect from your pen. Don't stop, the enjoyment is there for all to read. Thank you

When they want what they do not have

A real nice story -

I would actually have been flattered at being setup like that because the client WAS attracted to him. That was the the reason for the setup in the first place