All Comments on 'Dumped & Found'

by Xander

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
a nice story, but the wole thing is too breif

the whole story is a bit brief, otherwise it is a good story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Romance not erotic coupling

could have been longer with follow-up on Hal and Sally. Loved it overall

ddpmanddpmanover 17 years ago
Good Tale

Xander I thought you did a very nice job of writing with Dumped & Found.

I thought you might have a little more about Susan & Hal after the decit. Your Tale :) to do what you wnat with it. I will look for more of your writings

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