by Xander
the whole story is a bit brief, otherwise it is a good story.
could have been longer with follow-up on Hal and Sally. Loved it overall
Xander I thought you did a very nice job of writing with Dumped & Found.
I thought you might have a little more about Susan & Hal after the decit. Your Tale :) to do what you wnat with it. I will look for more of your writings