All Comments on 'Dylan's Turn to Learn'

what happens next love it

What else can I say. I've never read one of your stories I didn't like.

Babe, you are so good. Bet you are even better IRL!

Please don't let me harsh your ride, or cramp your style babe, but you need a proofreader, an editor. Your stories are too good to leave those mistakes in them.

Never ever let that enter into your mind when writing. You write well, you write naturally, you write hotly. Let a rewrite, where you fatten up your marvelous scenes, or a Literotica editor help you take care of them. Think of it like the buffing you deserve on both nipples, with hot willing tongues. Smooth off the bumps, sand them with your tongue, so the orgasms roll smoothly, effortlessly off our tongues.

Never ever forget how good you are. You always make me cum. Thanks for that.

91/2" cock at the very start? Didn't even go past that!

I assume other chapters will follow to finish this one out. Glad you came back to it cause i always felt like you needed to get to Dylan and Aunt Sue's involvement. Im glad "averygoodlay" (haha) skipped it. He missed a very good story. We ALL know Uncle Mike is hung, that has been set up in other chapters. Good work recalling the other chapters and keeping the continuity. I have not favorited them but i did really enjoy them. One day ill sit down and read the whole thing straight thru. 5 *s

please keep it up and never mind haters like him.

Just got around to reading this story. Great start--can't wait to see what happens with his parents and then the big day on Saturday.

Mmmmmmm yummy, lucky Dylan and what a way to start his birthday!

Your story yelling just gets better and better, don't ever stop and never think you are anything but awesome

Jean