All Comments on 'Eddie Takes Charge Ch. 02'

love it!

n waits till they are both in the his bed fucking one night when they havee say a gas explosion...to bad mom it burned down the whole house. and oh thank you n dad for taking out such an expensive insurance policy on us...i didnt know ..i know ill miss dear ole pam n yes dad also but that 2 million you guys had on pam n me will help my recovery that much easier...especially since i know dad was fucking pam...ill bet some of his fucking drugs caught fire...what mom he didnt have insurance on you...oh well mom you can always sell pussy n drugs to support yourself...and oh yeah please come by for dinner once a week if im home...be nice to look at dad though and say dad you know something...i hope you die a slow painful death and can feel everything thats happens to you

be nice to give her the aids virus so she can give it to him then he can give it to his wife also...then all 3 of them would get sick n die while he still lived..or kill each other for the mess they are now in

I guess that's why it's hot.

And I love this quote: "One day he would let his son know that Pam was his woman but, that would come later"

Right. Pam & Eddie. No friends, gang-bangs, rubbish like that. Just Eddie showing Wayne how a real man pleasures a woman.

Thank you"

Fantastic. Eddie is definitely the daddy now. After he takes that delicious ass he is going to be needing some quality coke soon. Then Pam will really earn her keep when he barters her now and then. CAN'T WAIT!

A truly sick, twisted, and evil tale you've written here. But it was also incredibly hot and once you start reading it, you can't stop. Nice job you've done with this!

Write more to this story. This is amazingly hot.

well written story's like these are very rare and it reminds me why i started reading at litorica. you have become a new favorite of mine i hope you write more.... please.......

More please

Write more. I'm thinking maybe maybe Edie's son is off somewhere doing these sorts of things to his...secretary?...doctor?...mother?...boss?...wedding planner?

This story is very sexy. I've read it over and over. I am dying to know what plans Eddie has for that involve getting her used to coke and alcohol. Please write more!

Can't imagine why anyone would find a drug-addicted coke whore sexy when you can find the disease-ridden sluts a dime a dozen on any street corner. They may look tasty, but they're a whole barrel of nasty.

At the beginning of this story I LOVED THE REST OF IT!

This is one of my all time favorites! But I'm hoping there is more to read about as you have implied a Few different ideas. I give this story a 10!

Please more...so good

Still fucking my father in law however a change took place when he brought in a friend of his a hunting and fishing buddy, Now I'm fucking two men and enjoying every

minute of it. PS. Just found out my father in laws buddy is fucking my mother in law.

Wow what a blast. Didn't think the old Bitch had it in her. Going to have fun when I

steal the old whores lover away from her.

Completely implausible, even for fiction. Not a single decent character in the lot. If they all died at the end, nobody would have cared. And when you make characters dumber than rocks (the husband in this case) you story turns into a rock and sinks into the mud where it belongs. Just plain awful.