All Comments on 'Eden Ch. 02'

by IrishDream

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Invisible2uInvisible2uover 16 years ago
Great!!

I love these two. I love also how you're teasing us a bit at a time. Makes the anticipation for the next chapter so much more intense!! Please more soon!!

Mistress_JoliMistress_Joliover 16 years ago
Continues to be good

I like how you switched the POV to Aidan and gave the history of him buying the lingerie. Excellent build up to the time at his apartment. Oh I would love to be Eden.

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