by Quantuman
I think this story needed to be in the Lesbian category; not the incest. It was more lesbian than incest.
This was a great story until you got into the p!ssing. The story could have been told without that.
I wasn't sure I wanted to include the pissing part, but believe it or not, Brooke is a REAL person, and she insisted I included it. It is a fetish turn-on for some people.
I LOVE ALL OF IT AND FEEL IT'S JUST PERFECT THE WAY IT IS PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY VERY VERY SOON
Great story so far, love girl on girl sex, but I have to agree could hav done without the pissing part.