All Comments on 'Egyptian Princess Of New Egypt'

It's a great start and hope to see more of it soon.

I like the set up of your story. We know who the love birds are. We know of at least 2 people who want to get at Lady Iris and that might be just the beginning. We know who is at least for now supporting of Iris. What we don't know is what's coming up. Who will strike first at Iris? Will Andreas be able to protect Iris?

I look forward to the coming chapters to get these answers and a few new questions!

Thanks so much, I'm working on Chapter 2. I enjoy my setting too, I hope to hear your questions and answer them too.

Beautifully done, but remember in those times her brother would be Pharaoh after his father s death he could not marry just anyone, he was a living god, And gods only married gods. He could only marry his sister . Her mother was her father s sister.

Hi nice spin of teh yarn.... but could be more spicy with things like Ra getting involved with Isis... or the maids of Isis pleasuring Ra while tehy witnessed... or may be even have Ra being subserviet to a Man liek andreas and both brother adn sistre being enjoyed by Andreas

Get an editor or at least a good proof-reader!

Great story I can't wait to read the rest of the series