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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
greatness

More, More, More!

theevilmrttheevilmrtabout 19 years ago
Great story please write part 2

I liked this story interested to see what you are going to do with the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great Start!!!

What a sexy, sexy start! Tim and Eleni need to keep going! This could truly be the start of something great!! I can see them continuing into a "Lifestyle Situation" (marriage, even?) with incredible submissions along the way, and after!! Eleni needs to be opened like a delicate flower, gently and slowly, with Tim's persistence and love. He has the makings of a great Dom Husband; sick and tired of all the bullshit that other so-called "women" spew, and that a young woman in love such as his Eleni will Never do to him.

This kind of love never betrays, as long as Tim keeps the FAITH with Eleni. Many happy episodes to all!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Love to read the rest

You need to continue this!!

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Originally from the Midwest and has lived on both coasts for many years, but keeps coming back to his home state. An occasional author of quirky poems, rants about gold-digging lost loves or soul-mates and the occasional short story, he is also working on three novels and ca...