All Comments on 'Eli's Awakening'

GREAT STORY! Keep up the good work! Enjoyed the "BIG O" right there with you! THANKS!!!!!

I thought it was a great story!! The anticipation and buildup was absolutely thrilling!

REALLY GOOD TALE BUT WHAT A TERRIBLE WAY TO CONCLUDE PART 1 . COULDN'T YOU AT LEAST HAVE ENDED IT BEFORE OR AFTER THE CLIMAX ?

Loved it all the way, until the end. If there isn't a part 2 on the way, you should be flogged!

Great story!!! Please say there is more. THANKS!!!!

Wonderful build up. Now its time to explore the possibilities.... Please give us more.

Thats all I can say is WOW

This story is awesome! Loved your writing and loved the sexual tension you were able to create!

A GENIUS AT WORK, WHAT A FANTASTIC STORY KEEP THEM COMIN

please, please write more!!!

Thanjk you lass, a nice tale here.... Well constructed with effort spent on the emotional turmoils of the Topic and nice ending too.. Able to visualize the characters here a mark of a well writen story and the ending was nicely erotic too

that was excellent..... on soooooo many levels. if you stop now ..... no, no threats..... just please don't stop.

this got me cuming so much!`

Absolutely awesome. The dialog was perfect. The set up wasn't rushed or forced. Wonderful writing. Keep it up.

This is art!

I agree, this is an absolute work of art, great writing, I was lost in the story. All I can say is fantastic, please keep writing, or get yourself published so I can buy the book!!

Shameless

All of that build-up to such a short sex scene. Smdh.

Holy crap! I LOVED that! 5 Stars!

Great writing but there better be a part 4. I get to the last sentence and I'm looking for the rest of the story. Really enjoyable reading¡