All Comments on 'Elizabeth To Beth Ch. 04'

My biggest issue with this series is that very often it is difficult to tell who is speaking. It seems you switch people mid paragraph or have the same person talking through multiple lines and it made it very difficult to follow who was currently speaking.

Great story.

The only thing that seemed wrong was that it was over ...

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

I agree with Thelvyner. Often difficult to figure out who is speaking.

Also, this chapter was lost on me. Didn't like the recurring use of handcuffs and blindfolds.

Didn't really like the ending, especially with no marriage. The Fetishes were over done and the author left the readers high and dry with no ending.