All Comments on 'Ella's First'

Delicious... 4.5 stars... I hope you continue this, author..

Well done for as far as you went with it. I was, however, disappointed that you ended it where you did. I was expecting him to reciprocate her attentions and, since this was not a "Chapter 1" effort, take her to conclusion.

I loved your story from the start giving it four stars but the way it ended I dropped it down to three stars, he got her off with his fingers and she gave him a blowjob then the story died, very disappointing way to end.

This story has no emotional content. It's like 2 ships passing in the night. Where is the tension, where are the expectations? What she she know about what she wants?

What is he doing in the sory> There is no desire here.

Keep writing and publishing!! Do you live in Jackson's Hotel?

Hi Anonymous, I don't live in Jackson's hotel but Ella lives just down the street a bit from there.

Needs a different title. Something like drunk book worm gives first bj to a stranger.