All Comments on 'Ellie's Charms'

loved reading it.

Too bad I never had those fun times in summer camp.

Started slow but got much better. It even has a hint of truth to it...I wonder how much of that is real and how much is BS.

You have an interesting and enjoyable writing style. The story built beautifully as you presented believable and highly erotic visual images. I also shall remember this story with pleasure.

Loved the break in the 4th wall!