by callmQ67
Excellent story, short, sexy & erotic. Can't wait to read the next installments.
omg this is awsome. i am so hot and wet right now. you are an awsome writer. you should write in first person more often.
This is your first story in 1st person? Well, count it a success. You should do more. Off to read Ch. 02.
First person is always difficult to write in you have succeded in writing a great story.
...if this is the summer of her 18th year, her age is 17. Work it out. Freddy
I felt like I was there. You must continue with several more chapters.
I could smell elli's orgasm and wish it were real. very good job, not many people can pull off first person perspective very well but you have!
Excellent....You got me all wet and Horny and waiting for the 2nd chapter. As I love saying "Don't stop baby".
Kelli