by SimonC
You really need to proof read. Half of it didn't make sense and you're grammar was awful. Also try and put some more description in.
What happened did you miss a chapter i was confused
Nothing really stirring or exciting. Just some so-so sexuality in a confused story that seems to have no connection with the past.
Chapter 3 ended with Ema wanting to go home, chapter 4 starts with her entering a house, which is not her home, with two men, of whom the reader never had heard before ...