All Comments on 'Emily, Richard, And Tom Ch. 03'

I adore this story. I hope you are planning to continue it. It seems like Emily is on the way to making Richard a servant fulltime.

Gotta have more! Please!!!

The most literate and well crafted piece of erotica I've read on the site

I enjoyed this story, please write more.

This is brilliant, but.... It's most unfair that you've stopped writing! We need more!

And now the next step is divorce!!! She has lost all respect for the husband and is only acting like the selfish bitch she is and he didnt get his gratification!!! Toss the whore out of the window and take the author with her!!!

is that how your dead ex wife died, thrown out a window? hehehehhee YOU fucking dim witted retard!!

IMO, chapter 1 was good and 2 sucked and 3 was a masterpiece. Author's weird decision to go from ch 1 1st meeting in bar to ch 2 AFTER their first time together in the apartment made no sense.

Anyway, throw 1 & 2 away and just read chapter 3.

Another loser wimp husband don’t have a guts to act like a real man loser

We agreed that it was unfair that you stopped writing there. For us it would add a little if Richard was not as willing , and his excitement not so evident .. his fear of how he looked in front of his wife should be more measurable.

I'm not sure why it ended here, I am hoping you simply was unsure how to proceed.

I think Bitchard must be made to feel more and more uncomfortable, I would like his wife to also feel a loss of control and with her also being humiliated perhaps away from the security of her home in a public place where she may be recognized.