All Comments on 'Emma Ch. 02'

I hope we get to see the continuing development of Emma and William's story. This is good stuff!

It's stories like this that bring me to NonCon.

You walked the line of reluctance and need SO well in your first chapter, and I love that chapter 2 showed a little bit of a kinder, caring side to William which just makes me like him so much more!

Also love the foreshadowing of the scars ;) Can't wait for more!

So tired of these rapists thinking that being wet is an invitation to fuck. If a dog licked his balls, does that mean he wants to fuck that dog?

An otherwise well written story.

To the first anonymous person to comment:

Yes, there will be a lot more character and plot development. I cannot say I have a perfect outline for the story already mapped out, but I do have a general idea of how this story will progress and end. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

To AstridOnnan:

I am so glad to hear from you that I succeeded in hitting the right mark because I took care writing the scenes. Also, I am pleased that you caught the bit about the scars! There will be much more to come, so please look out for new chapters though they may be few and far in between.

To the anonymous person that commented directly below:

I am happy to hear that my story is at least well written. In response to your comment, "So tired of these rapists thinking that being wet is an invitation to fuck," I just wanted to say that perhaps you shouldn't read stories in the NonConsent/Reluctance category if you are tired of it, because it is very likely going to be present here.You are right of course, because being wet IS NOT an invitation for sexual advances, BUT the purpose of my story is to explore the dubiousness of whether or not Emma wanted to be 'fucked'. Thank you for your comment. I genuinely appreciate your honesty.

So happy I found this series- this is exactly what I like to read in non-consent, a well-written story which blurs the lines between yes and no, right and wrong.

Emma and William are both great characters and I can't wait to read more of their story!

I did notice a couple of little errors - the use of the word objectionable (doesn't make sense), at dusk that morning, (same), and rended (should be rent -as its the past tense of 'to rend').

Waiting eagerly for more!

xx Em

Great story, I love it! I love the characters, and it's overall an amazing noncon story. So glad I found it:)

You skillfully balance Emma's physical desire for William and her inner conflict about wanting to feel pain... it makes the experience more real, more raw--it's amazing when you find a trusted partner with whom you can explore this dichotomy within non-consent fantasies.

And am pleased to hear that there is more to come. Just hope we don't have to wait so long for it. Looking forward to chapter 3. :)

Just making sure ur alive to write more! Please write more

Wow I loved your story you should definitely make a chapter 3!! I didn't read chapter 1 because normally I don't like to read stuff is the sense of rape or where there is violence but I loved how this chapter had a more loving sense.to it. I would love to read the next chapter if you intend on making another one, my personal request being that they actually go on sort of a date or he comes over for dinner at her house or something like that, so that they sorta bond and hopefully explain what all the scars are from and then get to the sex, still with that "making love" sort of sense to it but also rough like in this chapter. And then maybe even having another chapter or including it in chapter 3 where William looses his temper with Emma and beats/rapes her again and then leaves like in chapter 1 only to come back later a total wreck, feeling completely guilty and terrible about what he has done, and then that could be where he explains the mysterious scars. But anyways, those are just be my personal requests, Either way, please make a chapter 3!!!

Love the story and your way of writing. Write more please to this story and your other one too!!

Just letting you know that there are still people (like me) out here still wanting to read your next chapter on this. Please do a chapter 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 9 , 10, 11, 12, 13 and so on!!!!!!

read more about Emma and William.

Still hoping you will come back

Sooo...Don't know how to say this without you all hating me, but I will NOT be finishing either of the stories posted here. To be honest, I didn't realize how well received they were until recently. I stopped writing for a long time because...a girl grew up poor and couldn't really afford to waste time writing porn on the low.

When the pandemic hit this past year, I started writing again, but on a different site. Still not making money, but I really do love to write. (I dabble only in Fanfiction now)

About a week ago, I decided to come by and check on this account...and GOD! I'M SO SORRY GUYS!

THANK YOU SO MUCH to everyone that has loved these stories and continue to come back to them!

Writing for me has been a lonely uncertain process and sometimes I just can't get the story to move no matter how much I try. I want to tell you that they will be complete someday, but I don't know that I have interest in doing so anymore. So for now, don't count on it. Thank you all again. I know it is fucked up that I left them hanging like that.

Yours Truly,

Cockaddiction

Sooo...Don't know how to say this without you all hating me, but I will NOT be finishing either of the stories posted here. To be honest, I didn't realize how well received they were until recently. I stopped writing for a long time because...a girl grew up poor and couldn't really afford to waste time writing porn on the low.

When the pandemic hit this past year, I started writing again, but on a different site. Still not making money, but I really do love to write. (I dabble only in Fanfiction now)

About a week ago, I decided to come by and check on this account...and GOD! I'M SO SORRY GUYS!

THANK YOU SO MUCH to everyone that has loved these stories and continue to come back to them!

Writing for me has been a lonely uncertain process and sometimes I just can't get the story to move no matter how much I try. I want to tell you that they will be complete someday, but I don't know that I have interest in doing so anymore. So for now, don't count on it. Thank you all again. I know it is fucked up that I left them hanging like that.

Yours Truly,

Cockaddiction

Reading this again, I only just realized it was never meant to be finished and BITCH, I am fucking mad.

So good. So damn GOOD. FUCK.

Great job. I'll be back next year.