All Comments on 'Emma Ch. 30'

by bradley_stoke

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
My second Emma read

Perhaps I will need to read more to learn Emma's history and that will give me a greater appreciation for the details in your stories. In this one I don't it seems Emma gets involved with her aunt's friend (Fatima) for no better reason than as a cure to common boredom. I read this one to see if there was any lead in to Ch. 31 and the naturist college, and found nothing. Boy, Emma gets around... I guess I was looking for a little continuity between stories (timelines running consecutively; related settings; lead in facts...) I'll give you an "A" for effort but a "C-" for eroticism.

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