All Comments on 'Empire of the Black Moon'

by Kingmaker711

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
did not like it

i feel the rebellion should have won not the bitch.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
To previous commenter...

This is not Star Wars you STUP. 5 stars...great story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Great series but...

Can you put them in order?

EmptyEterntiyEmptyEterntiyalmost 10 years ago

Great addition to the story of Morgana, but I was kinda hoping to see more of the Black Knight.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
My favorite stories on Literotica but...

Did you need to kill the paladin ? It would have been better if it had ended with him making Clara his own consort...

I want evil to win and the cute and innocent to be transformed into sultry sex starved sluts (who wouldn't) but could we see some characters making it past their one time stories ? Not just reappear to be killed after but see how their character evolved, who they took as husbands/wives ?

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