All Comments on 'Encounter'

more please?!?!

Don't stop here

for a writing student you miss spelled a lot of words and also used a lot of the wrong words you must be flunking your course learn to write

Ofcourse he's "flunking" most of his classes as he's too busy spying on and satisfying his sister to think about writing classes hahaha lol, good shortish story though straight to the point none of this "we went out for a drink i looked at him he looked at me i winked he smiled i slowly sucked on my finger he....he then basically pounded me like two lions in a safari" basically a quickie story, not bad i wasn't bothered atall with the way you wrote it, i didn't even notice spelling/grammar mistakes as i understood what he was saying, why are so many people picky and act like complete arrogant fuckwits when you make a few mistakes like saying there instead of their etc, its stupid, but this story wasn't :)

good but the end seemed rushed needs a second chapter to fill out the missing parts

way to rushed no real background and no end all in all a waste of time either do it right and completely or not at all. if you had put in some better background and a proper end making this a two or three page story it would have been good but as is it is a waste of time.

I liked this story, it was good and quick. There is nothing bad about a short story unless it is badly written. This one was not. If you want background and a proper finish, go read a novel from your library.