by babydolls
very romantic, very erotic, very HOT, good delivery! The only nits I have to pick are the change of tenses in the beginning and the spelling errors, but they don't really detract from the reading pleasure. I hope Megan will meet her mysterious lover again - I hope there will be a sequel.
you must write more ... add a 2nd half to this. I want to know who this guy is ... a very good start keep it going.