All Comments on 'Encounters with Mrs. Cochran Ch. 03'

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ScorpioJJScorpioJJalmost 7 years ago
A lot of fun...Until it's not

Consequences

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

well that fucking sucked ass... WTF?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
she is a whore and hope her husband finds out

The guys should tell her husband and file charges for assault against the two that broke into the room. It would all come out how they pimp her out and she is a slut then her husband can divorce her worthless ass.

Hope she got aids from one of them or another disease to.

bewarebewareover 11 years agoAuthor
Embarrassed

art1972, thanks for spotting the discrepancy at the end. I had originally ended the story with their escape from town, but I thought further narrative was needed. Hope the ending didn't spoil the story for you or doesn't for other readers. I'll submit a revision.

beware

art1972art1972over 11 years ago
Switch

Switched cars at the end. Rest of story was good.

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