All Comments on 'End of a Era Pt. 01'

Another great story has started, and now I patiently wait for the next great chapter. I just love these old west storys by woodmanone.

Thank You woodmanone

As a "bush-man" in Africa, I can relate to your character. Excellent start to what I hope will be a long and interesting story. Well done and keep 'em coming ......

Stands by itself but the tie-in with the previous trilogy is clear and they are all worth reading!

Have enjoyed your other stories about the old west, & think this is going to be just as good.

Hope that you will post more like this in the futuer.

I can tell that this story will keep me excited for the ones that are coming. Great story and extremely well written. Thanks!!!

you see their names on a story and say "oh boy, we are in for another good read".

Thank you.

story. So well written, so interesting, such a happy surprise to find it in Literotica.

The name is derived from French, pincer = to pinch, and nez = nose. There is no Prince Nez (Prince Nose)!!!

A cute error.

Thank you for another great story.

I'll be waiting for every next part.

Keep on going with your writing

I love how your stories of the old west intertwine. You're a talented writer and I look forward to all of your posts. Keep up the good work.

Smella fine batch brewin' her. Gotta powurful thurst. Lyk it in small sips, lyka fyn whiskie. Hope ya made anuf fer us all. Pleez Sur, may I hav sum more?

Going 'back' to Chico Basin.... Your "westerns" bring back stories I heard as a kid half a century ago... family is Wyoming/southwest Montana.

Please keep it up, And Thank You

You're a good writer, and there is relatively little need for better editing in this story, but I think you should change the title to <I>End of an Era</I>.

Good story. like it mucho.

A very good story you have written, Amigo.

I'm back and this story looks like you woke up again, or maybe you just needed a break. Like before I will vote and leave my mark until the end.

Ed Grocott

edgrocott@gmail.com

Ed Grocott

edgrocott@gmail.com

I enjoyed this story as well as the Trilogy of others.

Telling Johnny's history in a news article (within the bigger story of his current timeframe) was a stroke of genius!

I'm not sure the McCormick Reaper had been invented by 1876, let alone the hay baler. Gotcha! Otherwise, I love your stories and how you weave them together.

ventureskrs:

Just a suggestion but you may want to look stuff up before you comment:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Reaper#Mechanical_reapers_in_the_U.S.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Baler

Woodmanone:

Entertaining story.

but the memories and stories will always prevail. TK U MLJ LV NV

Glad Maggie got her story. Would make a good book.

Nice to see your stories don’t have graphic sex esp anal. There are only that many ways to copulate and it’s good to see that you respect ur readers and don’t have to spell out bedroom scenes to try to embellish a good story.

Well done. Particularly liked your attention to detail as both the rifle AND the pistol used the same round in that time period.