All Comments on 'Enforcing the Law the Hard Way'

this story could have went so many ways! It was too short and the wording was corny. Don't be afraid to go into good detail when it comes to describing things. Come one, two cops and a kid who has to do whatever they said? So much more could have happened! The first paragraph held so much promise of more to cum, but... the only thing that came were the cops.

It seemed too short for me. A little detail would have been perfect.

It just wasn't long enough..and as previously said, the wording was a bit corny. You could definitely build on this story and make it lots better, though...

I got steamy about the idea behind it.

What else was the character supposed to do besides go along with it and pleasure his captors? I think they should have been even more vicious and unforgiving with his ass and mouth though and that other law enforcement officials should have gotten in on the deal since there was obviously no regulation or monitoring in the jail this prisoner was in. Sequel Please =)

Another excellent story!!!Only thing that would`ve made it better is if they double fucked him! Like I would`ve begged then to do me!!