by Egmont Grigor
Once again a nice story that made me feel good, and with an appropriate amount of sex. After reading I looked to see the author, and once again smiled - Egmont your good.
the idea of this story was great but the way you wrote it left something to be desired. also, if paula really did love him, why would she sleep with some random guy just because she was away from her boyfriend and wanted some sexin? i dont mean to knock your writing style entirely bc i like most of your work but this story was no where near as good as your other stories.
Finish this please, was just getting really into it and it stopped.
5 stars