All Comments on 'Entangled'

this was well written. You had me involved until the end. My husband get out of here. I don't buy it if she was as "entangled" as your story shows she wouldn't have reacted like that.

If you want to fix it you will need another chapter. I would like to see them wind up together. But I am a lesbian so that is my happy ending.

This was a great story until the surprise O'Henry ending. What happened to the honesty and openness? Not even a line to recognize the shattered trust?

What happened ? Talk about an abrupt ending !

Exactly with the other comments... it was so beautiful, and then she is to be hidden?

Yeah, such a BEAUTIFUL story about a home wrecking asshole, until the end when you remember that her lover is someone else's disloyal jerk. I hate cheating stories that sidestep the morality.