All Comments on 'Enter the Amazon Book 2'

Well, again, I'm definitely enjoying this series more than, say, The Oldest Profession or that one with the Demon things in the trailer park. I'm not sure why, probably has something to do with this one being tamer in terms of kinkiness or "grossness" I suppose the word would be than those other stories. And although I am a Christian, there is something tempting and wicked about the idea of nuns suddenly giving in to base desires and ripping apart their outfits.

I'd say if the story failed in any regards it'd be that the story flow changes pace very quickly from one set of characters to the next, it'll be interesting to see how this resolves.

OH! And as for writing advice, try to be a little more descriptive in the actual sex, maybe add some more positions other than just straight humping of each other (not that you don't write that well, it's just some diversity is always nice).

great and hot reading

Stephen J