All Comments on 'Envy.'

This was a fantastic and beautiful story

I'd love to see this developed over the course of a few chapters. Tell us more about how Evelyn met her spouses, how each spouse got acquainted with the other. Her relationship with Gisela. Overall this story by itself is absolutely delightful. However it has great potential to be something larger, greater, dare I say, #1 Hall of Fame.

Ps~ Is Teresa's name really spelt Thereza or was that just to help English folk along?

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