All Comments on 'Erectile Functioning'

by ainu

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
good start....

i like the character development and background. this would be a great first chapter....

kalodinkalodinalmost 13 years ago
First Rate

The juxtaposition of conventional misgivings with the inevitable direction of the characters is very imaginative and strikes me as rather a clever approach to a stimulating and well written stroker.

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