by SmoovB
Beautiful. Well written, erotically suspenseful, and fetishly on point. In totality, i'd expect a novella.
I love that you've made her libido a character all its own. Truly fantastic.
you set up so much material for later development...just a great chapter, great dialog. 5* for the writing, storyline and plot development for this chapter. This could be a major turning point. Well done!
Very interesting plot reminding me of something I did few years ago... Are you reading my mind somehow?