All Comments on 'Erika: Seduction Into Adultery Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
My appreciatiation for "Erika".

Zbsolutely believeable; that's thwe important quality.

So real, so well described and artistically put together. The kind of erotic story that you can easily pass along to the right femaale as it is paletable

to their thinking. I appreciate the full series. I hope to

find something else you've written

You are the best yet.

Jeremy305@aol.com

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Character

A bit hard to believe. She divorces her husband for cheating on her, and then she goes out and does the same thing, with her best friends even.

The guy is funny too. He loves his wife and kids, but has not sort of self control what so ever. After it is all done, he justifies it by then saying stuff about his wife and their sex life.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
so stupid

so stupid

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Erica's lover

Well done Leo, youv'e hit the jackpot yet again, you must have a lot of experience.or a vivid imagination, without giving too much away I too had an affair like that, behind my husbands back, I was absolutely besoted with him, I couldn't think staight at the time, back to the story it's well worth a sequel don't you think?

Love Jem 10/10

secret_lovesecret_loveover 18 years ago
Nice and Hot Story

A very hot, autoerotic and fantastic story. Nevertheless, I hope you don't really cheat on your wife. Eep. I am even more afraid to get married. And I will think twice about leaving my husband alone with a beautiful divorcee!

My favorite line:

Whatever Erika and I did, we would keep it a secret. Along those lines I decided to wash my clothes again since they smelled so strongly of Erika's pussy.

Hilarious.

Keep up the good work.

don87654don87654about 15 years ago
Pregnancy by mistake

You need to keep fucking Erika through the next few days with your sperm getting to one of her "eggs" and fertilizing her before she goes back on the Pill. At which time you begin to desire her instead of your wife and you gradually pull away from your marriage so that you and Erika can begin a new family together. I liked the parts where you peed together and used that hot salty fluid to bathe your privates after you had been fucking. Very erotic!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

made me have to piss..after I pissed I comed and it was dripping:P

I had to masterbate!! the story is so sexy! my heart is beating hard and fast!

jkthekatjkthekatabout 4 years ago
pretty damn good

Easily one of the best seduction stories I've ever read! Hope you still read your

comments! I may start writing erotica again- thanks to this one !

gpetagpetaabout 4 years ago

Good creative cheating with hot good described scenes, will see how it ends

jkthekatjkthekatalmost 4 years ago
same ole thing lol

just reread it and still loooooove it!!

oldtwitoldtwitover 1 year ago

Just to much sex for the whole day

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