All Comments on 'Erotic Adventure on the Trail'

I seldom comment 'cos everybody here is a better author than I , but as this is your first submission I'd just like to say good job , with a couple of constructive criticisms.

When you find a stranger at your campsite --- how do you know she's got ' a cute english accent'? before meeting her.

The other is just the perennial spelling & punctuation thing -- not bad .

Overall , well done & hope to see more of your work

Thank u 4 a beautiful story, I enjoyed every word, line and picture in my imagination of the eroticism of the situation.

Please continue the story, it has me hot for more?