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Our bodies gradually come down, and we even topple over onto the soft grass behind the bench, the flames still roaring near us as we come down, caressing each other and resting, catching our breath for whatever happens next...
- COMMENTS
CassieKover 14 years agoThank u 4 a beautiful story, I enjoyed every word, line and picture in my imagination of the eroticism of the situation.
Please continue the story, it has me hot for more?
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoI seldom comment 'cos everybody here is a better author than I , but as this is your first submission I'd just like to say good job , with a couple of constructive criticisms.
When you find a stranger at your campsite --- how do you know she's got ' a cute english accent'? before meeting her.
The other is just the perennial spelling & punctuation thing -- not bad .
Overall , well done & hope to see more of your work
