All Comments on 'Erotica Club'

The story is very good even if a bit exagerated in some action. However the final waterwork to reach the winning

level is quite unpredictable and well done.

It is a superb story well crafted and so hot. Very much guaranteed to achieve orgasm.

Soo naughty sounds like a delightful place full of perverse pleasure. thank you more please but maybe an editor might make a difference

so I stopped reading, skipped to the end, and rated it 1*.

What a super imagination. It sounds like a lot of happy people. If only I could participate in something like that.

Piss on this foolish story.

The story was OK but the miserable use of words, and punctuation made it hard to enjoy the plot. Is English your second language? Either that, or you sought to use Ghetto language -- either way, it was really hard to read.

Disgusting stuff. I got the feeling that if there had been another round she would have been eating shit! Ooofa!

Please work with an editor for any future posts. I had to stop reading part way through.