All Comments on 'Escape of the Schlange'

What an unusual storyline. Really enjoyed it Well done

Very Strange story!, by a very strange gifted writer.

A well written but weird story. Good luck in the contest.

I really enjoyed this ... in a sort of weird creeped-out way! But it's Halloween! If we're not creeped-out, you're not doing your job, right? :) Only you could pull off such a creative and freaky tale. The tone built the perfect mood and mental imagery. I kept going, "eeuuw!" and "omg, that's hot!" Good luck in the contest, SR.

I really enjoyed the story. Disappointed that the Schlange was defeated though; I enjoy seeing it win. Hopefully you'll write more with it. The satyrs are fun too.

Hot stuff, sr71plt. Hot stuff. You never disappoint.

Mmmm very nice :)

very hot, and equally well written. What an inspired idea, what on earth made you think of it?

Wow!!! Bloody incredible!!! No words are suitable to describe this...

holy shit....

WRITE MORE...DONT STOP EVER...

I really love your writing, I hope you do more stories!

I am a woman who loves this types of erotica.