All Comments on 'Escape to Paradise'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Great SEXY Story

Very Erotic

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
only the beginning we hope

off to a wonderfully sexy start !!!!!!!! So yummy ! i can't wait for the next installment. Please. i can't wait to taste that delicious ass of hers. keep up the great work !

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
like it but surprised

Surprised to see her cheating on Heather so soon, and being so cavalier about it ("What she doesn't know won't hurt her.") But very enjoyable and well-written nonetheless.

fanfarefanfareover 11 years ago
stripping

I doubt that one can strip away a veil of suspicion.

An investigator who is suspicious of a suspect could remove a veil of doubt or a veil of uncertainty.

A suspicious character could reveal what is behind a veil of concealment.

When using the concept of veil, to check for accuracy, temporarily replace veil with another word, such as cloud or mask. Then you can clearly see that suspicion is a verb and not a noun. It describes an possible action, not a thing or person. It asks a question of the suspect but does not describe them.

gotranegotraneover 5 years ago
HOT Stuff!

Yet another great example of how hot pantyhose can be! Can't wait to read the sequel!

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