All Comments on 'Escaping the Rat Race'

You need to follow you heart add more to this baseline loved the start.

thank you for taking the time to read and critique!

or light humour. What was there, was fun

This had the all the ingredients of a good story and I was sorry to see it end so abruptly. It felt as though it were being written by an adult with some knowledge of sailing and a good idea for a great story.