by Feotakahari
I absolutely adore this! I can't think of anything else to say, it's just so different and yet erotic. Ok, maybe the scarring is a little creepy, but it plays into the 'real damnation' aspect and is entirely redeemed by a love that's practically palpable.
The only thing I can suggest is, it's a little hard to visualise something like a person being lassoed by a tongue from across the room; some more detail on the more fantastic elements would be great. Aside from that, I've got nothing but praise.
I would love to see how this develops; if I could give it 6 stars out of 5, I would.
Thank you.
In one short page you have grabbed my attention. I'm going to play catch up now.
This has got to be one of the best pieces Ive seen on literotica in a long time. While I think that this does make an utterly perfect ending, I still would like to see it continued. >_<
i find your story interestingly unique id like to see how this progress's if you so choose to continue this as a series.