All Comments on 'Ethan Day'

Loved it looking forward to more of your work !!

Why do some of you writers insists on writing in present tense? It sucks.

Really poor writing - WTF does this exactly mean - "A crazy ex-girlfriend grow I'd literally only said "hi" to last night"???

There was just too much of this crap to try to figure out to enjoy reading this story for me.

Also what an asshole for getting a BJ and dumping the girl at a Denny's to get a ride home.

Hi all,

The overall rating has been above a 4/5 and over twenty people have favorited the story already. Thank you so much for the support.

Sorry for the spelling and grammar mistakes. I didn't use an editor for this one. I'll have an editor give it a run through and will repost a revised version within a few weeks.

I will aim to have a second chapter posted this month.

Thanks and Happy New Year

Definitely need more chapters! I really enjoyed the build up and look forward to the next installment.

Need more chapters. Stat.

this is a good start

Why is he jerkin off when he has 4 willin sluts???