All Comments on 'Etienne and Monique Ch. 03'

The moment I think this story couldn't be any better you prove me wrong!!! Again you have managed to employ everything I mentioned in my comment at the end of chapter two. I so often feel that writers fail to use enough descriptive language, in my opinion that's what places the reader "inside" the story. Certainly you could teach most authors a thing or two about description. That was brilliant the way you so cleverly described the absence of collagen dimpling on Veronique's derrière!! Rarely have I ever seen that being described and when I have it most assuredly lacked your elegance, I've only seen it referred to as "cottage cheese ass" that really never fits any story (laughing)! I'm hoping chapter three will be as descriptive and when the sexual relations occur that all the senses are involved. I am quite confident I'm not going to be disappointed. I fear I've fallen hopelessly in love with Veronique she has it all! Thanks for another excellent chapter and also for taking time to address the comments made by fans, that shows class. Many fail to do such unless someone has attacked or insulted them. On the edge of my seat... K

You do me too much credit my friend, but it is gratefully and humbly received. There are other writers who do a far better job than I at their descriptive narrative. Look up PaulGerard right here on Literotica, his "Yrba's travels" are bizarre, but insanely compelling.

Veronique is fab isn't she? :) Sometimes the brain does something when it writes. I think every author feels it from time to time when they 'nail' a character. I hope that I have made her and the twins believable. I know it is hard to stretch the imagination with characters like Etienne(ette) and Monique who seem almost otherworldly, but they have a special spot in my imagination too.

Either way, I write for two reasons; because I love creating and because I want others to enjoy what I have created. If I have done that just once, then I'm happy XD.

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A sincere artist is not one who makes a faithful attempt to put on to canvas what is in front of him, but one who tries to create something which is, in itself, a living thing.

-WILLIAM DOBELL-

I really enjoy where this is going.