All Comments on 'Eugene'

Good short story, well done !

Erotic - no. Thought provoking and interesting - of course.

that's good enough for me. :)

Liked this one a lot. It had an unsettling start, a frantic middle and a twisted end wrapped into one small package. Circle of life for Eugene.

Good deeds seldom go unpunished........

lol Eugene , is proly the epitome of " waste of space "

good story , Author did all but sign post the colossal fuck up , then the Author redeems himself , by at least having Eugene do the decent thing to end it.

although ..

dumb enough to goto the park to kill himself , dumb enough not to ask questions or take a few seconds to reflect before shooting unarmed men who know him by name ...

somehow after murdering them , he has the capacity .. to make a rational decision..

story throws you for a loop , how can he make so many bad decisions , yet in the moment of most anxiety , he makes a most sensible choice ...

sorry not horror

sorry not erotic

possibly humor & satire ??

xxxhugsxxx

TwistedOliver.

Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My least favorite story.